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Do you miss me at all?
Do you even care?
Do you remember your best friend,
Who was always there?

You left her behind,
Out of every plan.
And despite the exclusion,
Behind you, she ran.

She still stood up for you,
When morale was low.
She always had room for you,
When there was nowhere to go.

You pushed her away,
When she offered aid.
When you wished for quiet,
Away she would fade.

You grew out of your best friend,
Or so you had thought.
But she always fit well,
Not too tall, not too short.

But you’ve pushed her away,
For the final time.
You will miss her sorely,
Even at your prime.

I miss you already,
For that story you see?
Is the story of us,
And in it, you lost me.
©2008-2009 =schumigirl
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If this isn't my worst piece of writing, I don't know what is.

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:iconthelittlewolf:
If this is your worst piece of writing, i'd probably be struck with awe at your best...

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It takes strength to fail... i'm the strongest ever.

It is in changing, that we find purpose.

"The only thing you'll ever be, is a way for me to bleed on this stage" Confession by Cold
:iconschumigirl:
Aw, thank you! *blush*
I've had a terrible amount of writer's block lately, and it's driving me mad.
So the encouragement is awesome, thank you!

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.: be my butterfly :.
:iconthelittlewolf:
i understand writers' block badly... i've got five stalled projects right now, myself. But, i really think is a good piece. It struck me, because my best friend literally just moved away to Alaska. i understood she needed more for herself, but it was that one push-off that i had the most trouble with.

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It takes strength to fail... i'm the strongest ever.

It is in changing, that we find purpose.

"The only thing you'll ever be, is a way for me to bleed on this stage" Confession by Cold
:iconschumigirl:
Although I find with writer's block, after it leaves [or semi leaves, in my case], I usually write one or some of my best work. 'The Girl I Was', was the one I wrote straight after my writer's block left last time, and it's now one of my favourites :)

I'm sorry to hear about your friend. The piece was written about my best friend, who's moving away soon, to begin her University life in another city. Like you, I understand why she has too, I just find it really hard to deal with. I'm taking it too personally, I'm sure, but that's just the way I am.

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.: be my butterfly :.
:iconsushishu:
hmm. this is my story when it comes to best friends as well. it fits perfectly, every single thing. sad, isn't it, that things like this happen to people like us.

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It is sad, it's hard and it's real.

But time heals everything, and things do get better, although it takes a long while.

Hang in there, you'll be ok.

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.: be my butterfly :.
:iconsushishu:
Thanks.

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